Elizabeth+&+John

Text 1 Just the beginning

It started at July in a house party. One Finnish girl had a house party in Nättinummi and I was invited too with one of my friend. We went there at around 21.00. We went inside and had an amazing time there. The house was absolutely very high-class and had the best circumstances that I have ever saw. After that I noticed that one girl watched me at the whole time. I went there where the girl was standing and started a conversation with her.

Me: Hello cutie. I noticed that you are or might be interested of me. Girl: Hmm, I think that I'm falling in love with you at the first sight. Me: Why is that? Girl: I don't know, you are different from these other guys.

Then I and the awesome girl danced and had a great time. The girl impressed me because she was nice, cute, beautiful and honest. After that I sent her a friend request in Facebook and started to go out with her. It’s important that parents let you to go in these kinds of house parties because it is important that you make new friends and have a social lifestyle.

Love/ John

====A nice smile always catches my attention. A smiley person gives a positive image of him or her. I always notice a person’s smile first, a nice smile tells a lot about that person. Secondly I notice the whole person, how he or she stands, how he or she talks, what kind of clothes him or her has. Someone who stands out of the crowd is an interesting person. I would bore to death if I would have to have an interaction with someone who is just going with the flow. A person needs to have something special or different to keep me interested.====

Elizabeth
It’s a typical gray morning. Man walks down the street and buys a newspaper from the kiosk. He looks tired. He’s wearing worn out jeans and a hoodie. A phone rings, it’s his mom. He doesn’t answer. He just looks at the screen and puts the phone back to his pocket. He keeps walking. --- Man comes to a typical American diner, he sits down to the bar and the waitress pours him coffee. “Is this seat taken?” Man turns around. ”No, it’s not. Go ahead.” he doesn’t really pay attention to the speaker. “Hi, I’m Iris.” she says. Iris is nice looking girl, somewhere around 30. She’s dressed casually. She smiles. “Michael”, he says. “Nice to meet you. Hmm… Michael. I like your name. My grandpa is Michael. I mean was, he’s dead now.” “So sorry to hear that”, Michael says. “That’s alright, we weren’t so close anyway.” “Oh. Well, I’m going to leave now. I need to go to work.” “Okay, have a nice day at work!” “Bye” Michael says and smiles to Iris. Iris smiles back. He is definitely going to visit that diner a lot more now.

Elizabeth

Kaveriarviointi:

Lue ensimmäiset lauseet. Antavatko ne ajatuksen tekstin sisällöstä? Herääkö mielenkiintosi? - Kyllä mielenkiintoni herää ja ajatukset eivät vielä anna tekstin sisällöstä. Onko arvioimasi työ kiinnostava ja helposti luettava? - Kyllä. Se on myös helposti luettava. Minkälaisia vahvuuksia/heikkouksia huomaat työssä? - Vahvuudet ovat, että työ on mielenkiintoinen ja helposti luettava. Heikkouksia en löydä työssä. Oliko viimeinen kappale tehokas/vaikuttava? Miksi/Miksi ei? - Ei ollut kappaleita. Se oli dialogi, mutta dialogin viimeinen kohta oli ihan hyvä. Hyvästeltiin ja hymyiltiin. Kirjoita muutama esimerkki hyvistä sanoista/sanonnoista, joita kirjoittaja käytti. - Is this seat taken? - Have a nice day at work! jne.. Hyvällä mielellä / John

**BUSINESS CONVERSATION ** **//MADE BY: Gezim V(John), Markus B(Keith), Anuer.A(Mohammed) //**

**//PORTFOLIO //** **//FILM SCRIPT //**

====** MOHAMMED: ** It is a pleasure to meet you gentleman in my country. I would like to present you the best student of University of Alabama, who has arrived here yesterday after a long trip to Middle-East. ====

====** KEITH: **  Thank you for the invitation, it is nice to meet you finally. I have always wanted to visit your homeland and experience your wonderful culture. ====

====** MOHAMMED: **  Interesting. What do you think about John, Keith? ====

====** KEITH: **  Oh, I forgot! I have heard a lot about this guy. Where is he right now? ====

====** MOHAMMED: **  He is in the guest’s toilet right now. He is running out of the toilet paper… John is suffering from travel sickness because he hasn’t got used to long distance flights. Oh there he comes… Have a seat John. ====

====**//John comes into the room looking refreshed. He shakes Keith with his dirty hands and tells how grateful he is to meet him finally.//** ====

====**<span style="color: #0070c0; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">KEITH ****<span style="color: #0070c0; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">: **<span style="color: #0070c0; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">Hello John, It is nice to meet you finally after a week of travelling. ====

====**<span style="color: #00b050; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">JOHN ****<span style="color: #00b050; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">: **<span style="color: #00b050; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">Thank you, it is pleasure to meet you too Keith and of course you Mohammed. ====

====**<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">MOHAMMED: **<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Gentlemen, shall we start the conference? ====

====**<span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">JOHN & KEITH ****<span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">: **<span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">Yeah, Let’s do this thing brother. ====

====**<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">MOHAMMED ****<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">: **<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">First of all guys, I want to show you my business partner who is responsible for all my money finances. ====

====<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">M**OHAMMED** **<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">: **<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">Ok let’s get to the serious point of the business. I shall make a deal with you Keith about running our gigantic Terrorist Organization. And of course you John, your knowledge will help our future. ====

====**<span style="color: #0070c0; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">KEITH ****<span style="color: #0070c0; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">: **<span style="color: #0070c0; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">I want to make a deal of 10 years with my company which is the best company in the USA named UCLA as you know. We are going to fully fund your Organization in the hope of better future. ====

====**<span style="color: #00b050; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">JOHN: **<span style="color: #00b050; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Ok, listen up this is what I thin… ====

====**<span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">JOHN & KEITH: **<span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> What? What is happening?! Please let us know!! ====

====**<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">MOHAMMED: **<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Calm down, everything is just fine. Our culture may have little differences with yours. We are quite loud and disrespectful to the lower people. ==== ====**<span style="color: #002060; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">JOHN & KEITH: **<span style="color: #002060; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">Ok??? ==== ====**//<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 13.3333px;">The business partner walks into the room opening slowly his jacket and showing the bomb inside him. It was silent for a moment. //** **//<span style="color: #c00000; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12px;">MOHAMMED RUNS QUICKLY OUTSIDE WHERE HIS HELICOPTER IS WAITING FOR HIM TO LEAVE. //**====

====**<span style="color: #002060; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">JOHN & KEITH: **<span style="color: #002060; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">Please don’t harm us. We haven’t done anything to you. ====

====**<span style="color: #984806; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">BUSINESS PARTNER: **<span style="color: #984806; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">It doesn’t matter. This is all because of George Bush. I have gotten a mission to terminate you. So long, I am going to bomb you guys. ====

====**<span style="color: #002060; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 20.8px;">BOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!! THE WHOLE PLACE BLOWS UP IN THE AI <span style="color: #002060; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 19.2px;">R. **====

====**__<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 18.6667px;">PS. This was made just for laughs. Please do not take it personally.We had a great time doing it together and we had no argument of doing it. __**====

<span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Lue ensimmäiset lauseet. Antavatko ne ajatuksen tekstin sisällöstä? Herääkö mielenkiintosi? <span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> Tekstin alkuvaiheesta huomaa helposti, että kyseessä on elokuvan käsikirjoitus. Mielenkiintoni herää.

<span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> Onko arvioimasi työ kiinnostava ja helposti luettava? <span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> Työ oli kiinnostava ja helposti luettava :)

<span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> Minkälaisia vahvuuksia/heikkouksia huomaat työssä? <span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> Kielioppi on hallussa, en huomaa paljonkaan virheitä, muutamia löytyi kyllä.

<span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> Oliko viimeinen kappale tehokas/vaikuttava? Miksi/Miksi ei? <span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> No koko teksti oli yksi kappale :D Oli hyvä teksti. Ja hauska.

<span style="color: black; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> Kirjoita muutama esimerkki hyvistä sanoista/sanonnoista, joita kirjoittaja käytti. Teksti oli täynnä niitä

Elizabeth